Conrad Rice

Critiqued your story, clo.

Well, now I know a Polish swear word, ha ha ha. To get to the critiquing part now. I honestly can't see a lot wrong with your story. I liked ...

As far as making it clearer that Austin did not kill anyone, you may want to say something to the effect of it all being just a thought. I would ...

Reason, Ghost, I got yours done.

Well, this turned out to be an interesting opening. Let me see just what I can find. The older man, the one who Kriesler is working for, was a particularly ...

Well, interesting story you have here. I must admit it messed with me, but I will not let that interfere with my review. That being said, I don't think that ...

Sugar, We're Going Down- Fallout Boy

I was informed that the character in this story was lacking characterization. I was also told that you were the person to turn to in matters like this. Any help ...

Doctor My Eyes-Jackson Browne

Once again, a very good story. I like how you showed us something as horrible as a nuclear strike through the innocence of a child's eyes. It is very much ...

He Stopped Loving Her Today- George Jones

9/10. Hobbes is freakin awesome.

Leaving On A Jet Plane-John Denver Cause I'm leaving on a jet plane Don't know when I'll be back again

Nothin' 'Bout Love Makes Sense-LeAnn Rimes